- 主题:孩子写的英文论文,请提意见
What thing would you like to do that you have never done before? For me, it would be to be having the top grade in class. I would like it because it can make me more popular, make my parents happy and make me more hard working. This is why I would like to have a grade that is the top of the class.
Making my parents happy is good for me. My parents always hopes the best from me, so if I don’t get a good grade, they often would “kill” me. I can benefit from my parents if I got a good grade. They said I can buy something I want If I got a good grade.
Having a top grade can make me a lot hard working too. It can make me more and more self-confident on learning. I would know that I have the patensial to be good at learning, and can make me more want to improve my grades.
It can make me a lot popular. Because you have a good grade, more and more people will ask you questions on learning. Being popular can help me on elections. That way, I can go to a better middle school.
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谢谢提醒
【 在 ferrall 的大作中提到: 】
: 小错误比较多,可以用grammarly看看。 内容太少不能叫论文,可以叫段落。
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对,不过我觉得的第二点不对
【 在 tokilltime 的大作中提到: 】
: 典型五段论
: 这是老师教的模版吧
: 虽然差个结尾
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5年级
【 在 fotobang 的大作中提到: 】
: 几年级了?
: 【 在 icome 的大作中提到: 】
: : What thing would you like to do that you have never done before? For me, it would be to be having the top grade in class. I would like it because it can make me more popular, make my parents happy and make me more hard working. This is why I would like to have a grade that is the top of the class.
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