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?The Visitor of Peaceland?
Annena sit down under the big tree.She was too angry that her big cousin William who was eleven yell at her and took her umbrella. Suddenly,the tree began to spin,and she come to an amazing land called Peaceland. She was not scared at all,she was nine years old.
A boy see her and says:"Hello!I am Peter Sparkle.Who are you?""Hello too.I am Annena.Where is here?"answered Annena."This place is called Peaceland,It has a hundred years history here."Annena smiled:"It's was very wonderful!""Go with me,I will show you my big sister."Annena was excited,so she go.
When they arrived,they see a girl wearing two rose red clothes sit on a diamond chair with a green jewel on her flower crown."Peter,did you take another visitor,aren't you?"asked that girl."Yes,my dear sister.""I see,"said the girl,"maybe she is too young.""I am nine,nice to see you." said Anenna."She was called Annena."said Peter to the girl.
"Nice to see you too,Annena."smiled the girl,"I'm Hairon,and I was thirteen.Peter is ten.""Wow,your garden was so pretty.And it smells good!"said Annena."Thank you.my two uncle,Harry and Hillary and my aunt Henny build it by themself!""Where should I go?"asked Annena,"I want to go back home!"
"You should do three things then you could go home."answered Hairon's uncle Harry,"swim over the long cold lake,catch an eagle who is flying and jump into this fire hoop.What do you want to do first?" "Swim over the long cold lake."Annena answered. She did not knew how cold the lake are."Today or tomorrow?"asked Hairon,she know Annena would choose.
"Tomorrow.Beacause today I wanted to know more about here."Annena was excited and happy,she even want to cheer!A man called Alexander told her:"You can choose a guide if you want. they are Jack,Luke,Jennie and Monica." "Monica,I will choose Monica to be my guide!"Shouted Annena happily.
"Okay.Monica!Go and told her something about here."said Hairon Sparkle.Monica goes.She asked Annena if she want to see the jewel tree first,Annena agree.They go many place in Peaceland,like the giant rainbow flower.But that time was not very long,the time finally over.It was night now,All the people went sleep.
But little Annena can not sleep,she want to see more place.She want to woke up Hairon,but she even don't know where her room is!So Annena lie down at a bed in a room that Hairon told her to live,she began to imagine about The Little Piggy Who Was Jumping.Suddenly,a dragon who was kind and could fly went on"Annena's"bed."
"Ahhh!A dragon!Help!"cried Annena,she put her head under the pillows,she was too scared.The dragon says:"Oh,don't worry about this.I am a good dragon!I am Henry. Okay?Let dance!"when Annena hear this,she know that Henry was a good dragon,and says:"Okay!"she liked dancing very much.She danced a new dance that her dancing teacher teach her.
The dragon wiggled his body.he thinks that was a kind of dance too!And he like dancing just like Annena.Annena try not to laugh,because she thinks Henry danced a little bit silly.But after a minute a soldier of Peaceland run into "Annena's"room and slammed the door.He shouted:"A dragon!"he looked surprise.
"You are here!I don't want to kill you,but queen Linda told me to do this.So you must run away until queen Linda let you free!"said the soldier,his name is Zach. "No!"cried Annena."He is my friend now!" Just suddenly,A woman came.She is Linda,but she did not looked very angry: "Oh,dragon.Now I know about you."
"Your highness,aren't you still angry for that dragon?"said Zach astonished,Linda smile and says:"Zach,your son come to my castle today and told me the truth.Sorry, dragon,Please forgive me.I know you are kind now."dragon Henry forgive Linda and hug all Annena,Zach and Linda.Linda promise she won't said anything about kill him.
Annena heard a sound like William.She know she was in dream,she says to all the people in Peaceland:"Can you all go to the real life?if not,maybe I can't see you in the future!"Suddenly,there fog and their is an old man.He was the dream god,he know all the people who was dreaming and all the dream.
"I know what you want,"said the dream god."But you have to opened your eyes, because you should wake up first."Annena open her eyes and saw William and her umbrella."Well,I don't really want to take your umbrella,but Nina wants it."Willaim said.Nina is Annena and William's baby sister,who was only two years old.
Annena really did not want to made Nina sad,but she needs it to dance in a school play.She know that tomorrow was the school play day,today she should know how to do and what she need.She go and try to dance with the video under the tree.She signed.The dancing was too long and all the girl in her class should do that. And they should sings in the same time!The song was long too,Annena cried:"Why? Why I should do that?It was just for a silly play which take a half of hour!"Finally,her classmate Steven came.He says:"Hey!did you know?Our teacher said the class should do that play was not our class!That means you don't need to dance!"
Annena take a big breath.Her class was class 2.The class should play that play was class 1."Steven,let us go and play the toys!"Annena have an idea,she is happy, because Steven is her best friend. "Okay! Let go!"Steven agreed with her idea.They began to play fancy toy people,Steven made an ice cream,sure it was a toy.
最近自己改的。。似乎就改了点时态吧。最近一年多英语基本停了，没啥进步。
The Visitor of Peaceland
This is Peaceland,a place full of beautiful and peace.
CHAPTER ONE
Annie sits down under the peach tree in her garden.She was angry because her older brother,William,stolen her umbrella.She didn't feel the umbrella was stoled,and she got wet back home.William laughed at her.
"My brother was so mean,"She complains,"How I wish I could go to another place,without that awful boy!"
The peach tree seems to be hearing what did Annie says.It spins,and get her out of the garden.
"Girl!Get up!"
Annie woke up.She saw a boy."Who are you?"She asks,looking around.
"Hello.I'm the prince,Peter Sparkle.And you?"
"Nice to meet you,prince Peter.My name is Annie Openshaw.Where am I?Isn't me in my garden?"
The boy says:"This is Peaceland.It is a beautiful kingdom.I am sure you will like here.You must come from other place,come with me,I'll let you see the palace."
"That sound good!I can't wait it!"
CHAPTER TWO
Peter get Annie to the palace.
There are diamonds and little jewels around the castle,colorful flowers was dancing in the wind.
"Wow!"Says Annie,"Look at here!Pink lilies!I have many lilies either,but they are pulled out by my brother William.He was a terrible boy."
"I don't lies to you,right?"Says Peter smiling.Annie nodded.
"Now,come here."Peter takes Annie into the castle.
A pretty lady sit on the throne.
"Good morning,Peter."Says the lady,"You get a visitor here,isn't you?"
"Yes,my dear sister.Her name is Annie Openshaw."Answers Peter.
"Good.Miss Openshaw,my name is Helena.I'm the princess of the Peaceland.I am sixteen.How old are you?"
"I'm eleven.You said you are a princess,but you look like a queen.Where is the king and queen?"
"Come with me.I will take you to their place."
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: 英写作怎么样 也晒下
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