写的不错，词汇量惊人
哪里有语法错误？
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: A fantastic day with the Monkey King
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: One night, Lisa changed into her pajama as usual and decided to sleep. But when she climbed into her bed, there appeared a creature covered with fur. Lisa gasped :’who are you?’ ‘I’m the Monkey King, Sun Wu Kong’, the creature replied. ‘Want to go on a trip?’ ‘Yeah’, Lisa said. ‘Hop on my back’, Wu Kong said. Then they took off and disappeared in sight.  
:         After what seems hours, Wu Kong stopped in front of a large, wooden door, it said ‘The dragon palace.’ Wu Kong and a startled Lisa walked in. The moment they came in, Lisa felt that she had come into another world, there were walls made of purple and blue cristal, floors made of white sand with pink seaweed growing on them, and plates made of silver……. Everything around them was so beautiful, right in the center of the room sat areal dragon with gold scales. ‘Who are you?’ he asked. ‘Sun Wu Kong and a friend Lisa.’ Wu Kong answered. ‘Oh, would you like a meal with me then?’ ‘Ok, thank you!’ Lisa said, ‘Where are the food?’ ‘Wait and see.’ said the dragon.
:         Moments later, there was a booming sound, from a black door walked out lobsters, turtles and crabs, they were carrying food on gold plates. On the plates were tofu, fried seaweed, sushi, boiled fish and even flaroured seastars! After a happy meal, Wu Kong and Lisa left the dragon palace. Suddenly Wu Kong said ‘I have to go, if you want to see me again, ring this bell, I will come immediately, goodbye!’ Lisa was sad that Wu Kong left, so she want to ring the bell. Just then, she was shaken awake by her mom, ’time to get up sweetie!’ Lisa noticed that the bell was still in her hands, and she smiled, what a good dream!
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牛津树的感觉

【 在 hrx 的大作中提到: 】
: A fantastic day with the Monkey King
: One night, Lisa changed into her pajama as usual and decided to sleep. But when she climbed into her bed, there appeared a creature covered with fur. Lisa gasped :’who are you?’ ‘I’m the Monkey King, Sun Wu Kong’, the creature replied. ‘Want to go on a trip?’ ‘Yeah’, Lisa said. ‘Hop on my back’, Wu Kong said. Then they took off and disappeared in sight.
:        After what seems hours, Wu Kong stopped in front of a large, wooden door, it said ‘The dragon palace.’ Wu Kong and a startled Lisa walked in. The moment they came in, Lisa felt that she had come into another world, there were walls made of purple and blue cristal, floors made of white sand with pink seaweed growing on them, and plates made of silver……. Everything around them was so beautiful, right in the center of the room sat areal dragon with gold scales. ‘Who are you?’ he asked. ‘Sun Wu Kong and a friend Lisa.’ Wu Kong answered. ‘Oh, would you like a meal with me then?’ ‘Ok, thank you!’ Lisa said, ‘Where are the food?’ ‘Wait and see.’ said the dragon.
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FROM 111.205.43.*

厉害，我闺女五年级，只能写五句话
【 在 hrx 的大作中提到: 】
: A fantastic day with the Monkey King
: One night, Lisa changed into her pajama as usual and decided to sleep. But when she climbed into her bed, there appeared a creature covered with fur. Lisa gasped :’who are you?’ ‘I’m the Monkey King, Sun Wu Kong’, the creature replied. ‘Want to go o
: n a trip?’ ‘Yeah’, Lisa said. ‘Hop on my back’, Wu Kong said. Then they took off and disappeared in sight.
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FROM 111.193.96.*

厉害，我儿子五年级，只能写五句话，还错误百出

【 在 wlalbert 的大作中提到: 】
: 厉害，我闺女五年级，只能写五句话
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FROM 223.104.41.*

我们家三年级暑假写的，情节模仿哈利波特，错误一堆我也不去管它了，内容看着有点意思，娃小的时候想象力丰富能写出点东西来，将来越大就要越没有想象力了。
Diamond Contest

All things are good now, so a contest was coming. Three people would take part in it. They were Energy Hero(HE), Harry Potter(HP), and Black Hole(BH).
There were a lot of things in front of them and the first one who touch the diamond would win.
They were ready, and the contest begun. First, some robots came. EH fought them with laser beams, HP fought them with curses, and BH crashed them into pieces and ate them.
They were all doing their best, but suddenly, the roof broke and three big pieces of fire rock shot towards them.
EH broke one of them into pieces and hit the robots with the pieces. HP carryed one of them with his wand and crashed it into the ground, BH ate the last fire rock happily.
The robots and the fire rocks were gone, and there was only one thing in front of them——three big moving walls.
EH is very fast, HP can apparate, so they past. But BH wasn't so lucky, he crashed into the wall and was burned to death.
EH and HP were in the diamond room, but there weren't any damonds. They were very disappointed.
EH found a little grey rock sticked on the wall, so he touched it.
EH moved into a room, there was a boy in the room, he was holding the diamond. The boy gave the diamond to EH.
EH opened the door, holding the diamond, and disappeared in the bright light.
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