我请chatGPT给评估了一下，特别说明无视语言。
Evaluate this composition. Disregard the language. Evaluate its content and argumentation, and give a score (total score:10).
chatGPT4.0
智者论
篇一
本篇以寻找智者为主题，通过千里马和伯乐的例子来阐述寻找智者的重要性和方法。文章从伯乐识马的故事开始，引出贤者和寻贤之人的关系，然后提出了识马的三个境界——以耳、以目、以心，从而引申到识智者的方法。整体上，文章论述清晰，论证过程较为严密，有一定的说服力。
篇二
本篇主要探讨了如何培养智者。首先指出严肃的教育方式并不利于培养智者，然后提出了天赋和良好教育的重要性。接着，文章引用古人的“读书有三到”来说明学习的标准，并强调师德对于培养智者的影响。最后，文章提出了智德并重的观点，并强调对待生徒的公平性。文章论据丰富，论证有力，具有启发性。
总评分: 8.5/10
本文整体上论述清晰，结构合理，观点鲜明。篇一通过千里马和伯乐的例子，阐述了寻找和识别智者的方法，篇二则探讨了如何培养智者。两篇文章均有较强的说服力和启发性。然而，文章在部分论述过程中存在一些细节可以进一步完善，因此总评分为8.5分。
chatGPT3.5
For the first composition, the author uses the metaphor of a horse to discuss the search for intelligent individuals. They argue that it is not just about finding individuals with intelligence but recognizing people who can recognize intelligence themselves. The author suggests that true recognition of intelligence is not easy, and one must use intuition as well as objective judgment to recognize the genuine thing. Overall, the composition sheds light on the difficulty of recognizing intelligence.
Score: 8/10. The argument is coherent and engaging, but the content may benefit from further elaboration.
In the second composition, the author discusses the cultivation of intelligence in individuals. They argue that being strict is necessary, but not enough, to cultivate intelligence. The author posits that intelligence is derived primarily from natural ability and good education. They emphasize the importance of good teachers and strict discipline when cultivating intelligence and warn against lack of focus and favoritism by teachers. The author also emphasizes the importance of good character and teachers as role models.
Score: 9/10. The author has a clear argument and provides thoughtful insights into the cultivation of intelligence. However, certain points could benefit from more clarification. Overall, the composition is well-written and thought-provoking.
【 在 keyi2013 的大作中提到: 】
: 这篇是最近写的《智者论》，小学三年级。今年背完了《老子》5000字，背了二三十篇古文，对比一年半前写的感觉文笔用词行文略有长进。输入输出转化比挺高。
: 篇一是等看电影的时候，写了半个小时写完的，很顺畅。
: 似乎总共就写了这么三五篇吧。
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