虽然有几个语法错误，但是能有意识的用这么复杂的语法，对小学生来说很厉害了。

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: What thing would you like to do that you have never done before? For me, it would be to be having the top grade in class. I would like it because it can make me more popular, make my parents happy and make me more hard working. This is why I would like to have a grade that is the top of the class.
: Making my parents happy is good for me. My parents always hopes the best from me, so if I don’t get a good grade, they often would “kill” me. I can benefit from my parents if I got a good grade. They said I can buy something I want If I got a good grade.
: Having a top grade can make me a lot hard working too. It can make me more and more self-confident on learning. I would know that I have the patensial to be good at learning, and can make me more want to improve my grades.
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