娃昨晚临睡前口述了个英文小故事给我听，我觉得还挺有意思，就帮他录了下来。我水平有限，只能帮忙改了几处小的语法错误，其他的不知道还有没有什么大的毛病，请高手帮忙看一下订正一下。我给同事看了，同事说是中式英文，真的很中式吗？我本来觉得他第一次编了一个比较完整的小故事，还挺惊喜的，但感觉又被泼了盆冷水。娃说还要画几幅画，配上这些文字，做个comic，我想尽量帮他改到没有什么大毛病就行。
说凡的就免了，真心请教，我自己英文丢了20年了。。。
补充一下：娃一直说自己要做能力救援队队长，所以有了能量蛋、能量英雄这些东东。。
以下是原文：
Once upon a time，there lived three women who eat energy eggs to survive.Until one day，they got enough energy and became very evil.
They attacked many people，and the king’s soldiers couldn't defend against these three women.
Until the energy hero appeared to fight with these evil women.They fought for thousands of years.
Finally，the energy hero defeated these three evil women. And all the people who had been attacked by these three evil women came back to life.
They all cheered.Everyone was happy.The world came back to normal.The energy hero was happy，too.
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