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: A fantastic day with the Monkey King
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: One night, Lisa changed into her pajama as usual and decided to sleep. But when she climbed into her bed, there appeared a creature covered with fur. Lisa gasped :’who are you?’ ‘I’m the Monkey King, Sun Wu Kong’, the creature replied. ‘Want to go on a trip?’ ‘Yeah’, Lisa said. ‘Hop on my back’, Wu Kong said. Then they took off and disappeared in sight.  
:         After what seems hours, Wu Kong stopped in front of a large, wooden door, it said ‘The dragon palace.’ Wu Kong and a startled Lisa walked in. The moment they came in, Lisa felt that she had come into another world, there were walls made of purple and blue cristal, floors made of white sand with pink seaweed growing on them, and plates made of silver……. Everything around them was so beautiful, right in the center of the room sat areal dragon with gold scales. ‘Who are you?’ he asked. ‘Sun Wu Kong and a friend Lisa.’ Wu Kong answered. ‘Oh, would you like a meal with me then?’ ‘Ok, thank you!’ Lisa said, ‘Where are the food?’ ‘Wait and see.’ said the dragon.
:         Moments later, there was a booming sound, from a black door walked out lobsters, turtles and crabs, they were carrying food on gold plates. On the plates were tofu, fried seaweed, sushi, boiled fish and even flaroured seastars! After a happy meal, Wu Kong and Lisa left the dragon palace. Suddenly Wu Kong said ‘I have to go, if you want to see me again, ring this bell, I will come immediately, goodbye!’ Lisa was sad that Wu Kong left, so she want to ring the bell. Just then, she was shaken awake by her mom, ’time to get up sweetie!’ Lisa noticed that the bell was still in her hands, and she smiled, what a good dream!
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