是的，倒装可以。带通篇倒装就感觉很奇怪。跟米国native speaker 请教了一下，人家回复说：“It seems alright.  most people would likely say "To the right of" instead of "On the right of"”
chatjpt回复："Yes, your sentence is grammatically correct. However, it might be clearer to phrase it slightly differently depending on the context. For example, you might say, "To the right of the classroom building is the dining hall," or "The dining hall is located to the right of the classroom building." These alternatives might provide a clearer image of the spatial relationship between the two buildings."
- 来自 水木社区APP v3.5.7
【 在 SlO 的大作中提到: 】
: 倒装句。表示位置的时候常用。
: 如果单一句用倒装没问题，可以增加文章句式的多样性，显得不单调。
: 但是这里课文中通篇倒装句，只有一句是正常顺序，这就有些别扭了。特别是这种教材的文章，很容易让非母语的学生误以为 表示位置时倒装语序是常态。
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